Visual & Data Poetry

Exclamation Point

from POWER POINT, winner of the 2025 National Press Women Communications Prize

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Visual poem titled 'Exclamation Point' on a red background. Text fills the shape of an exclamation mark, moving from the overuse of exclamation points in emoji culture to the stark reality of active shooter drill instructions: RUN. HIDE. FIGHT. The dot at the bottom reads: 'your life. This is all we've got, all that stands between you and the end of the sentence. RUN! (for office)'

EXCLAMATION POINT. Warning / Surprise — the exclamation point is meant for conveying strong emotions, HARK! It is overused by the millennials' emphatic insistence to emoji Everything! by the Gen-Z'ers, who 'really mean it!' are over-sensitive, triggered constantly in-active shooter drills, told to: 1. RUN 2. HIDE 3. FIGHT. Pay attention, Jan! Dan! Eddie! Mia! this could save your life. This is all we've got, all that stands between you and the end of the sentence. RUN! (for office)

About This Poem

'Exclamation Point' skewers inadequate approaches to school safety, questioning generational divides and what effective protection looks like. The warning sign shape and erratic font (reminiscent of a ransom note) suggest the feeling of being held hostage, literally and figuratively, in a state of escalating and constant alarm.

Explore the Data

The poem traces the exclamation point from emoji overuse to active shooter drill instructions. These are the numbers behind America's school shooting epidemic.

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Data year: 2018–2023

YearIncidents at K-12 schools
201894
201945
2020 — COVID — schools largely closed23
2021136
2022188
2023348

Source: Everytown for Gun Safety, "Gunfire on School Grounds," 2024. Includes any instance of a gun being fired on K-12 school grounds, whether or not classes were in session.

Everytown's definition is broader than FBI's — it includes all gunfire on school grounds, intentional and unintentional.

Data year: 2019–2023

StatisticFigure
Public schools conducting lockdown drills95%
Students who felt scared/upset after a drill42%
Students who had trouble sleeping after a drill22%
Teachers who felt drills increased student anxiety60%

Source: NCES, "School Survey on Crime and Safety," 2019–20; Everytown, "Dangerous Drills," 2023.

The US is the only country in the world where active shooter drills in elementary schools are standard practice.

Data year: 2009–2023

CountrySchool mass shootings (4+ killed)
UK0
Australia0
Germany1
Canada2
France2
United States~288

Source: Adam Lankford, "Public Mass Shooters and Firearms: A Cross-National Study of 171 Countries," Violence and Victims, 2016; Everytown database. Definition: 4+ killed, not including perpetrator.

Since 2000, more than 74 million US children have participated in at least one active shooter drill (Everytown, 2022).

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